Tuesday, June 22, 2010

I cry why...

Breaking Down

aching, breaking, feeling the pain
why does it have to be this way?
writhing, screaming, punching
emotion takes over

darkness falls on me, I cry out, why?
falling deeper into blackness
until I break
I cry, not why, but
save me, I'm so lost
who can save me?

He is there, this mystery that I can't see
why should He care, why is He here with me
I thought I was alone in the dark
He whispers to me, you'll never be alone
I am always here with you


  1. Did you write this? It's incredible. I love your blog

  2. Thank you ChristineMarie, yes I wrote it in a moment of desperation a week ago. I don't write much poetry but maybe I'll start.

  3. I'd say this is quite the impressive start, sir :)

  4. good job my brother i like it


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